HELP ME CHANGE THIS PARAGRAPH UP MAKE IT MORE DESCRIPTIVE>>>ASAP!!!!!!!?
HEYYYYYYYY GUYS I NEED HELP A>S>A>P my language assignment is due in 2 hours and help me edit this paragraph!!!
It went like this. I paddled toward shore with all my strength. I felt the wave catch up to me and begin to life me into the sky. I was holding onto the rails of my board for dear life. I was moving faster than i could imagine. But it all happened so quickly. I was dropping down the face of a steep wall of ocean. my mouth was open. I know that because when i did the face-plant into the bottom of the wave. I was gargling salt water, thinking that maybe I was about to die. The wave drove me deep into the water. I flapped my arms around, thinking that going back up to the surface was a good idea. But it wasn’t. At least not then. I surfaced just in time to open my eyes and see my airborne surfboard eclipsing the morning sun. And aimed straight for my head. WHAM!!
It went like this: I paddled toward the shore with all the strength I had in me. I looked back for a split second and saw the wave catch up to me as it began to lift me skyward. I was holding onto the rails of my board for dear life while the wave pushed me into a speed that was faster than i had ever experienced. Suddenly I was dropping down the face of a steep wall of ocean. I knew my mouth was open because when i did the face-plant into the bottom of the wave I was gargling salt water, thinking that I was about to die. The wave drove me deeper into the water and I flapped my arms around trying to gain control of myself and thinking that going back up to the surface was a good idea. But it wasn’t, at least not then. I surfaced just in time to open my eyes and see my airborne surfboard eclipsing the morning sun and aimed straight for my head. WHAM!!
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Surfing Wipeouts